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Eric D

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Sorry for the abrupt ending. I haven't finished it yet. ;) Please let me know what you think at stronghandsdeepvoice@yahoo.com


"Take your time Nick" the young man smiled to himself, as he toweled off quickly inside his friends empty room. Only an hour ago he had received a call from his friend Nick letting him know he would be late for a "double date" due to  an unforeseen problem at work.

"Don't worry" Nick had reassured him, "Just hang out there until the girls arrive and make yourselves at home like you usually do. There's plenty of food and I'll try to hurry."

"Are they good looking?" Jacob had replied skeptically. "I'm not too sure I want to entertain your friends all night playing board games with them."  

"No worries." nick laughed. "I think you'll like lindsay and Ashley. Either way I think you'll owe me one whether I show up or not."


His friend was right. From the time the two girls had arrived, Jacob had a hard time keeping his eyes from wondering, mostly because both were very beautiful and unmistakably dressed for attention. Even though both seemed to like him, Ashley was definitely the more forward and flirtatious of the two, "accidentally" brushing up against him on a couple of different occasions.

They weren't sure who's idea it had been to get in the hot tub, but Jacob was very glad they did. He watched both girls climb up and over the edge of the tub, slipping carefully into the hot water. While Lindsay wore a low cut white and gold suit, Ashley surprised both of them wearing only her white bra and panties as her suit.

"I forgot my suit" she had said with a smile.

If Jacob's eyes hadn't given him away when both girls climbed into the water, his fully erect **** almost bulging out of his wet swim trunks, definitely had once they all decided to get out.

Most of Jacob's body was now almost dry now and in-spite of the obvious betrayal of thoughts by his renegade mid section, he felt pretty good about how things had went once back in his friends room.

Throwing the wet towel to the floor, and sliding the wet swim trunks over his still semi erect **** and onto the floor, he crossed the room to his the large walk in closet looking for the clothes he had taken off earlier that evening. He picked up his boxers and started to slide them on when he heard a faint voice coming from the wall of the closet.

He froze listening intently to the two female voices belonging to the only other people in the house.

"But you should have seen his eyes when you climbed out Ash. His mouth was almost on the floor" he heard Lindsay say.

"His mouth?" Ashley replied with mock surprise in her voice. "I was paying too much attention to that huge package he was trying unsuccessfully to hide."

"I saw that" Lindsay said trying to cover her laugh. "But in all fairness Ash, climbing in with just your bra and panties on didn't leave much to the imagination once you were wet."

"I was wet before climbing in." Ashley said smiling. "I'm kind of in one of those moods"

"Too much information." Lindsay replied eyes raised.

"Oh, you know what I mean" Ashley said. "Besides, it's just the same as a swim suit Lindsay. And it's not like he didn't enjoy the show, right?"

"They think I'm large." Jacob thought to himself smiling and looking down at his newly erect ****, excited by the thought of the two women in the next room changing. The large soft tip stood bouncing slightly as even more blood flowed into the already thick shaft. He had to admit that he had never thought about it or even actively set out to compare it, but just like any guy, he would always accept compliments about his size.

As the voices continued, Jacob thought that they sounded too clear to just be coming through the wall. And then he saw it. A small vent just below one of the closet cabinets.

"No way" he thought. Moving the clothes and shoes on the floor directly in front of it, he bent down following the voices that became steadily more clear until, through the small opening, he saw and heard Ashley reply. If he was surprised by anything he had already heard, it was nothing to what he was now seeing.

"Anyway, I think he likes YOU anyway." Ashley said removing her towel and throwing it onto the large bed in the center of the room.

Two beautiful girls, still wet from the hot tub, stood feet away from him in perfect view. His already massive shaft throbbed and bounced slightly, continuing to harden to it's ridged potential. Not taking his eyes off of this taboo scene, he reached down and took the engorged member in his hand as if to pinch himself, making sure what he was seeing was real.

Jacobs eyes rested on Lindsay standing closest, bare breasted wearing only her wet panties, hair slightly wet at the ends, touching just below her shoulders. He could see where the hot water from the tub had turned her soft white skin a light pink.

He took a deep controlled breath, trying not to make a sound.

His eyes fell on her chest and the firm breasts accented by light brown nipples and hardened by the combination of cool air against warm wet skin. He tightened his hand more solidly around his thick shaft. In one motion he moved his hand up the shaft, over the sensitive head of his penis and then back down again gripping it tight again.

He imagined the taste and feel of taking one of Lindsay's nipples in his mouth and how she might react to the sucking and pulling his eager mouth and lips would cause.

He watched as she slipped her thumbs inside the waste band of the thin wet material molded to her hips and in one smooth motion they were on the floor. 

Straitening up, she glanced over at the naked body of her friend standing across the room and stopped, watching for almost three full seconds before answering in a much different voice than before. "I don't know about that" Lindsay replied. "He couldn't take his eyes off you in the tub and you know me, I can't...I have a hard time being that forward. Besides, you're the one with the large DD boobs that guys can't keep their eyes off and a tight little body to go with it."

"You just need a little help" Ashley smiled, cupping both of her breasts and pushing them up into a sexy and playful pose. "Besides, with my help, I guarantee, there's nothing he wouldn't do to y...I mean for you." she grinned.

"I've seen your help Ash. Besides, there's no way I would even dare" Lindsay said, glancing down at her own naked body.

"Would you be willing to try" her friend asked, moving closer and attempting to reestablish eye contact with her friend. "You really are beautiful. I just think you need a little push to realize it. Or maybe a poke." she smiled.

Lindsay paused smiling. Looking her friend in the eyes and noticing for the first time, how beautiful she really was. Even without her body, Ashley had a personality that was infectious and extremely hard to ignore. She thought about how easy it was for her friend to be flirtatious while maintaining complete control. She thought about her perfect breasts flat stomach and her always manicured and shaven mound. 

"I'm up here Lindsay" Ashley smiled.

"Sorry" Lindsay said, eyes flashing back up, her own face turning red.

"I just get too...I mean, my body's not like yours Ash."

"Well of course it's not." she winked. "But that doesn't mean it's not incredibly sexy. I mean look at you. You have it all. Butt, boobs, and legs. There's not much more any guy or girl would want.

"Thanks. But it's not as if anyone would notice the difference until..things progressed." Lindsay said, moving to pick up her panties near the bed.

"What do you mean?"

"I'm just...  Nevermind. Do you think Nick is ever going to make it?" Lindsay said quickly. 

"Don't change the subject" Ashley said moving closer to her friend again. "What are you talking about?"

"Nothing. It's not a big deal"

"It is if you're self conscious of it. If it's causing you to be this insecure about yourself." Ashley said, touching Lindsay's arm.

Is it your nipples?" Ashley prodded, reaching up and bouncing the bottom of her friends closest breast and moving away quickly.

"No." Lindsay reacted, reaching over and tweaking Ashley's nipple in retaliation. "It's a little more further down than that."

"Well show me." Ashley laughed, still covering her breasts from further attack. "Or am I going to have to go all lesbo on you and find out for myself?"

"I wouldn't put it past you" Lindsay smiled back wondering what it would be like to have her best friend probing her as if at her yearly doctors visit.

"You're not going to let this drop are you?"

"Nope."

"Bsssss. Bsssssss. Bssssss."

Jacob jumped, moving quickly away from the vent and frantically trying to find the source of this inconvenient interruption. He knew right away it was his vibrating cell phone but no matter how quiet it seemed at other times, right now it seemed to be all together too loud.

He found it in his the clothes near his feet, fished it out, and saw "Nick" flashing on the screen.

Still but naked, he moved quickly out of the large closet, closing the door  softly and moving to the far side of the room.

"Where are you!" He answered.

"Sorry Bro, There's no way I'm going to make it before 2 am at the earliest. The server is down and no one leaves until we get it fixed. That's kind of the curse of IT. A lot of down time, and odd hours when it's needed.

Anyway, how are the girls?"

"Oh, they're ok." Jacob offered, trying to down play the perfect situation in which he now found himself and that he wanting desperately to get back to. "We're having a good time and I'm trying to satisfy both, which shouldn't be too hard."

"Oh yea." Nick laughed. "I told you you wouldn't be disapointed. Just remember you owe me one."

"I do. I really do" Jacob admitted.

"Well listen, I've got to get back and from the sound of it, so do you." Nick said. "Just remember to change the sheets when you're done."

"Will do budy. We'll see you"

"Bye."


Turning the phone off and tossing it on the bed, Jacob rushed to the closed and assume his secret view from the vent. He bent down, making sure not to make a sound and looked through the vent with visual anticipation. But although he could still make out the voices, the girls had moved out of view.

"Damn it." He said in a whisper and standing back up. "I need to get in there."




"See, the clitoris sticks out way far. It doesn't look normal" Lindsay touched above the pink gathered ribbon of skin protruding out from her two shaven outer lips and pulled up slightly. She was sitting on the edge of the bed with her legs spread with one knee bent and foot resting on the bed.

"Are you serious?" Ashley laughed, kneeling on the floor only a foot away from her newly vulnerable friend. "You're just turned on. Mine does the same thing when I get like that.

"But it's like this all the time" Lindsay said, touching the pink sensitive skin with her pinky.

"Ah, yeah." her friend replied lifting her hand and resting it very close to Lindsay's open lips. "But that's not a bad thing. In fact..."

The touch was somewhat unexpected, even for Ashley. "This right here,"  brushing the very bottom of Lindsay's swollen clitoris, "gets very full when I'm turned on. Very wet and very..."

She paused. The look on her friends face had changed from concern to a look of desirable agony.

Lindsay bit her bottom lip as her friends finger moved ever so slightly against her sensitive clitoris. She adjusted her hips slightly and laid back slowly on the bed, resting on her elbows. This instructional touch had obviously had much more of an effect than was intended.

Under other circumstances, this reaction wouldn't of course, be unexpected, but this was different. This was her friend. Her shy quiet girl friend that would never dare do anything...like this.

"Are you ok Linds? Does that feel good?" Ashley asked in a quite voice, unsure whether she should proceed. 

"Uh-hh" was barely audible as Ashley watched her friends naked chest move slowly up and down.

Ashley moved her finger thoughtfully down along the silk like surface of the soft gathered pink skin.  A soft gasp and the increasingly warm and wet feeling against her finger, provided assurance that her continued touch was very being very well received.

To be continued.

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Thanks for sharing the story. I think that fills the fantasies of a lot of people. Two hot girls and some voyeurism. I can't wait to read the rest.

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